Tuesday, April 12, 2011

Jagged - Poetry


Jagged

Laciniated, fragmented,
accidental mosaic.
Work of art,
artlessly broken.
A master craftsman
painstakingly mends
me so my edges
won't cut him so.


 

13 comments:

  1. I love the edginess of this post. Sorry I couldn't resist. It was very nice. I look forward to reading more of your work.

    Thanks for stopping by.

    lisa
    InspiredbyLisa

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  2. Very different. There are so many forms of poetry that sometimes I don't recognize them as such.

    Gregg Metcalf
    Colossians 1:28-29

    Gospel-driven Disciples

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  3. Nice imagery.


    Lee
    Tossing It Out
    Twitter hashtag: #atozchallenge

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  4. Hi,

    Clever piece of poetry! Meets the criteria Love Hurts! ;)

    best
    F

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  5. Your poem shows such an excellent use of words. I am jealous. Great job!
    Nancy
    N. R. Williams, The Treasures of Carmelidrium

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  6. Hello.
    I really like this...especially the ending.

    Nice one!

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  7. A well penned metaphor. Nice to see some of your poetry Li :-D

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  8. I like this! Every word speaks volumes like a long Haiku. Excellent!

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