Monday, April 11, 2011

Magpie Tales Photo Prompt 61 - Stained


our lips,stained
mine with dye
yours with wine
or is it just
our hearts breaking
and both of us
tasting blood

Magpie Tales Prompts

40 comments:

  1. Drink seems to make many Magpier's maudlin this week... :)

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  2. I've tasted the wine and the blood!

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  3. awe. For some reason this made me kinda sad!

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  4. Oh, very good. What would we have done if it was a glass of white in the photo?

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  5. Beautiful and succinct. Loved the imagery.

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  6. Ouchhh!! This was one "dark" piece.. loved it!!
    Hugs x

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  7. Lisa,

    As usual, great stuff. The word stained makes the poem.

    Always glad when I drop by.

    TS

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  8. I agree with Corrina, nice imagery.

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  9. Interested in knowing what the dye versus the wine stain means, but liking the sound of it all.

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  10. Hi everyone:
    Thanks for your comments! normally I answer them, but the A to Z Challenge is eating into my time tremendously. If you check back here, PLEASE leave a link to your blog. Some of you don't list your blog (if you have one) on your profile, so I can't check you out or follow you back!

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  11. Reveals a depth of feeling, as relationships often go...

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  12. Just another wonderful example that less can be more.

    Stu
    http://bornstoryteller.wordpress.com/
    http://stuartnager.wordpress.com/

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  13. Li, very few people have the ability to make a difference with minimal word usage. You have that gift! Loved it!!

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  14. This is both heartbreaking and lovely. Love the imagery, too!

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  15. This is beautifully composed ...

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  16. Lots of story in that brief piece - nicely crafted!

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  17. beautiful words... really conveyed the sadness of the characters.

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  18. Another short and sweet Magpie...

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  19. ooh! darkly delicious :D nicely written!

    My Magpie Post

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  20. delicate piece.

    beautiful write…

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  21. Heyo... just going to quote this in my blog...
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  23. Oh shoot... stupid mobile browser, my comment published twice. Can you please delete the duplicate? Thanks.

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