I wished him dead. He died.
"So, am I a murderer?" I asked.
"Depends. If you have that power, wish him alive again."
I didn't.
So I guess I am.
"So, am I a murderer?" I asked.
"Depends. If you have that power, wish him alive again."
I didn't.
So I guess I am.
this says so much -all in30 words!
ReplyDeletei'm liking the psychological points you're putting across lately
ReplyDeleteThought provoking all in thirty words.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
A few words, but I read them over and over again. And, I could continue to so. This is excellent, thought-provoking stuff.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you just used up all of your wishes?
ReplyDeleteWow -- nicely done. This one will linger.
ReplyDeleteWow Li, that is few heavy words there. I'll have to think on this for awhile :)
ReplyDeleteJules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow
Flashy and clever :)
ReplyDeleteWagging Tales - Blog for Writers
Wow, I find flash fictions hard to write in under 200 words. To do it in 30 is exceptional. Beautifully concise.
ReplyDeleteLove it! Sharp and clever.
ReplyDeletelove it! nice.
ReplyDeleteTo 30 words is quite content ... Who has not been at some point in their life murder of thinking?
ReplyDeleteVery hichcockian.
ReplyDeleteWow. Short, sharp, and shocking. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteEllie Garratt
Excellent! You are so good at using just a few words to tell a complete story!
ReplyDeleteHaaaaaaaaaa, oh this is so deliciously wicked!!
ReplyDeleteOoh, very intriguing. Great work!
ReplyDeleteSarah Allen
(my creative writing blog)
Cool. Very cool.
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