tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post1799864177833533380..comments2024-03-19T03:20:22.623-04:00Comments on Flash Fiction: Semaphore - PoetryLihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-36655647782938991262014-06-11T16:43:14.312-04:002014-06-11T16:43:14.312-04:00Yes. I seldom write poetry, this is one of the few...Yes. I seldom write poetry, this is one of the few that I was actually happy with.Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-49692634470933021092014-06-09T22:12:31.992-04:002014-06-09T22:12:31.992-04:00May I please quote this poem in a post of mine? I&...May I please quote this poem in a post of mine? I'll link back.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-72014503119506686042011-08-10T06:40:41.764-04:002011-08-10T06:40:41.764-04:00Congratulations, Li! You made Featured Writer of t...Congratulations, Li! You made Featured Writer of the Week. A well-deserved award for this piece.The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-52726098737316065802011-08-08T21:03:16.807-04:002011-08-08T21:03:16.807-04:00Hi Li. coming round for judging. Your poem really ...Hi Li. coming round for judging. Your poem really rocks.<br /><br />There is a discussion on-going on the RFWer site. Would appreciate if you would drop by, leave a comment and vote. We need your input!<br /><br />Here's the direct link:<br /><br />http://fridaynightwriters.blogspot.com/2011/08/weekly-wrap-up-voices-challenge-no-13.html<br /><br />Thank you<br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-29825636690556535632011-08-08T10:36:46.036-04:002011-08-08T10:36:46.036-04:00Lots of sensory details here - sound, smell, touch...Lots of sensory details here - sound, smell, touch, visuals. Nice!J.L. Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05666634455836834179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-21622046324732430572011-08-07T10:26:13.049-04:002011-08-07T10:26:13.049-04:00Beautiful piece Li!
LxBeautiful piece Li!<br />LxLaurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03604785269958873474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-45278910031767464542011-08-06T19:27:47.501-04:002011-08-06T19:27:47.501-04:00This is a rather provocative piece. I haven't...This is a rather provocative piece. I haven't heard the word "semaphore" for quite some time and interestingly in this context.<br /><br />Lee<br /><a href="http://tossingitout.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Tossing It Out</a>Arlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-10218606322087036672011-08-06T16:36:41.258-04:002011-08-06T16:36:41.258-04:00some really fun word play here...
delicate tracer...some really fun word play here...<br /><br />delicate tracery<br />eyes neck lips <br />fingertips<br /><br />nice...and love the continued call to speak to me...as communication is huge in relationships and often one of the biggest failings...<br /><br />and in the end the relief that it need not be vocal...i like...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-25568639416482518972011-08-06T14:26:16.058-04:002011-08-06T14:26:16.058-04:00Love it. My favourite is
speak to me
one thousand ...Love it. My favourite is<br />speak to me<br />one thousand ways<br />never a word<br />if you like<br />be silent<br />just not still<br /><br />Well written!Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-64434136378939804552011-08-06T12:01:40.322-04:002011-08-06T12:01:40.322-04:00Beautiful! Love the last two lines.Beautiful! Love the last two lines.Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-74700356166637808972011-08-06T08:49:18.574-04:002011-08-06T08:49:18.574-04:00Love the last line, and the "epistles on my s...Love the last line, and the "epistles on my skin". Great imagery!Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-13000894439797696692011-08-06T08:28:35.208-04:002011-08-06T08:28:35.208-04:00I like the flow of this poem. Love these lines:
...I like the flow of this poem. Love these lines: <br /><br />"speak to me<br />one thousand ways<br />never a word<br />if you like<br />be silent<br />just not still" <br /><br />I also belong to a poetry community, D'Verse. You might want to link up with us for our activities specially every Tuesday starting at 3 pm EST. Here is the link: http://dversepoets.com/Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-11027825229904462102011-08-06T00:27:18.495-04:002011-08-06T00:27:18.495-04:00It flows right off the tip of my tongue... Beautif...It flows right off the tip of my tongue... Beautiful!Danahttp://dana-mycrazylife.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-57670292247900864002011-08-05T23:42:22.932-04:002011-08-05T23:42:22.932-04:00As Francine says, a saxophone would not be out of ...As Francine says, a saxophone would not be out of place. I'll be singing this poem all day. Wonderful for Voices.<br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-16087987150796908492011-08-05T23:02:28.129-04:002011-08-05T23:02:28.129-04:00Oh, this is my favorite type of poetry! I love how...Oh, this is my favorite type of poetry! I love how your words flow over me. It feels like a stream of images slipping through my mind. Stunning!Marsha A. Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18380081382159214513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-10660744775949841172011-08-05T22:31:10.832-04:002011-08-05T22:31:10.832-04:00A powerful voice, excellent rhythm and emotion. A...A powerful voice, excellent rhythm and emotion. Awesome :)<br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-90939207079157336422011-08-05T20:12:08.909-04:002011-08-05T20:12:08.909-04:00Lovely rhythm in this poem about relationships.
We...Lovely rhythm in this poem about relationships.<br />Well done.<br />Anna<br /><a href="http://annasadornments.blogspot.com/2011/08/voices-romantic-friday-writing.html" rel="nofollow">Anna's Romantic Friday No 13 - 'Voices'</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-38553660207649665862011-08-05T19:44:06.679-04:002011-08-05T19:44:06.679-04:00WOW - wonderful!WOW - wonderful!Sylvia Neyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09700149683391617521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-26141383161661212762011-08-05T15:58:03.286-04:002011-08-05T15:58:03.286-04:00Hi,
So love the rhythm and blues of this: a saxop...Hi,<br /><br />So love the rhythm and blues of this: a saxophone playing in the background, sultry voice letting loose the words on the ether. Lovely, lovely, lovely! ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-36368569836107630622011-08-05T14:43:49.370-04:002011-08-05T14:43:49.370-04:00I really liked the way the last line of each stanz...I really liked the way the last line of each stanza segued into the new theme of the next. Well done!Beverly Diehlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00392288953821757887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-5700410875700794882011-08-05T14:21:41.482-04:002011-08-05T14:21:41.482-04:00You showed your creativity and talent with this po...You showed your creativity and talent with this poem, Li. Perfect ending.<br /><br />Beautiful!The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-59350488059013072552011-08-05T13:30:05.772-04:002011-08-05T13:30:05.772-04:00Very sensual, a lovely write and a lovely read.Very sensual, a lovely write and a lovely read.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-63989521162758124852011-08-05T13:06:36.305-04:002011-08-05T13:06:36.305-04:00If music could be soundless, it would feel like th...If music could be soundless, it would feel like this! The piece was like a song in my head, liked it a lot. Speak to me. . those three words seem very, very piercing. Lovely!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-12561275151026298762011-08-05T11:56:40.928-04:002011-08-05T11:56:40.928-04:00Good rhythm, it seems to wash over me. I like the...Good rhythm, it seems to wash over me. I like the repeating first line.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13195645967378589211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-10609919911388830612011-08-05T10:22:38.169-04:002011-08-05T10:22:38.169-04:00It has a really nice rhythm to it, just like a son...It has a really nice rhythm to it, just like a song.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com