tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post6617909439985632856..comments2024-03-20T21:37:01.626-04:00Comments on Flash Fiction: Storm Chaser-Short Story SlamLihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-22012738896357724662011-06-14T23:17:40.925-04:002011-06-14T23:17:40.925-04:00You Rock!!! You say so much with so few words. Y...You Rock!!! You say so much with so few words. You're amazing!Heather Henryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01754067768246898183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-86279785607411287502011-06-12T21:02:32.800-04:002011-06-12T21:02:32.800-04:00I think that happened to me. I was gone a short wh...I think that happened to me. I was gone a short while and over a legally defined period of time I lost the woman but she kept the house. Maybe that is a different storm, and a different kind of twist.<br />I like yours better.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-37400831855120191962011-06-12T16:16:50.574-04:002011-06-12T16:16:50.574-04:00Thank you. And hey, guys...remember, she's jus...Thank you. And hey, guys...remember, she's just a fictional narrator. You can always go back and read 'Awake' and feel good about yourselves. :)Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-49419213407158436342011-06-12T12:46:12.297-04:002011-06-12T12:46:12.297-04:00DANG! But, nicely done!
A. ManDANG! But, nicely done!<br /> A. ManCharles L. Mashburnhttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/06/12/behind-the-clouds/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-48309490544348567062011-06-12T11:39:20.882-04:002011-06-12T11:39:20.882-04:00What a unique take on the prompt, loved each word ...What a unique take on the prompt, loved each word and though a wee harsh on my gender, I did love the ending!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-70570860511232375822011-06-12T05:55:25.728-04:002011-06-12T05:55:25.728-04:00Terrific little story. I love the twist (twister?...Terrific little story. I love the twist (twister?) at the end.Altonianhttp://scandicsequences.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-34981760384236296372011-06-12T03:57:31.651-04:002011-06-12T03:57:31.651-04:00WoooooooW! How am I to express how was your poetry...WoooooooW! How am I to express how was your poetry...Cool! superb....hugs!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-47353957802707187012011-06-11T12:40:43.899-04:002011-06-11T12:40:43.899-04:00Your piece captures the essence of the SLAM in Sho...Your piece captures the essence of the SLAM in Short Story Slam !! It packs a real punch !!<br />And the analogy is powerful !!MISHhttp://www.writer-in-transit.co.zanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-24232409932248305252011-06-11T01:26:37.564-04:002011-06-11T01:26:37.564-04:00flash fiction indeed.
well done.
love reading it....flash fiction indeed.<br />well done.<br /><br />love reading it. :)Jinglehttp://www.thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-48491028541866841822011-06-10T12:37:53.419-04:002011-06-10T12:37:53.419-04:00Blogger blues here. Hope this isn't a repost.
...Blogger blues here. Hope this isn't a repost.<br /><br />Just had to say nice work! A lot of emotion in 100 words.<br /><br />And says, in his best Forest Gump imitation, "And that's all I got to say about that."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-15333412172947676132011-06-10T10:16:57.535-04:002011-06-10T10:16:57.535-04:00grat write. loved this one.grat write. loved this one.Isabelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16630181168510791132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-8880672605028280932011-06-10T05:05:52.177-04:002011-06-10T05:05:52.177-04:00I'm still having trouble logging in under my n...I'm still having trouble logging in under my name. That's why there's no picture. I'm amazed you can say so much in such a short paragraph. I love it. Thank you for your recognition of my blogs. I appreciate it. I added Blog Hop to my main blogs. It's great. Keep up your always outstanding writing, and thanks again.Botheredhttp://thingthatbotherme.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-40104465357822581142011-06-10T02:45:56.316-04:002011-06-10T02:45:56.316-04:00Fabulous and such a tiny morsel - love flash ficti...Fabulous and such a tiny morsel - love flash fiction. It really tests the writer. Great. Shah from Weekend Creation Blog Hop at wordsinsync.blogspot.com. XShahhttp://wordsinsync.blogspot.com/2011/06/weekend-creation-blog-hop_10.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-85570117062856724372011-06-10T01:47:44.522-04:002011-06-10T01:47:44.522-04:00100 words not one wasted, powerful and beautifully...100 words not one wasted, powerful and beautifully writtenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-57284229960239844052011-06-09T20:35:14.400-04:002011-06-09T20:35:14.400-04:00Love this! I would say point made big time!! Great...Love this! I would say point made big time!! Great little write!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-22523064336117654572011-06-09T11:00:48.404-04:002011-06-09T11:00:48.404-04:00That is absolutely stunning!! That photo must hav...That is absolutely stunning!! That photo must have inspired you because your story sure captured my imagination!Emmhttp://missus-emm.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-29648797481220420442011-06-09T10:25:24.371-04:002011-06-09T10:25:24.371-04:00Another great little piece!Another great little piece!Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-39910682343675042682011-06-09T09:34:02.250-04:002011-06-09T09:34:02.250-04:00A bit sexist! :-D Great write Lisa, nice of you to...A bit sexist! :-D Great write Lisa, nice of you to rejoin (laughing). I'm lost on this prompt but I'm sure it will come to me.andymac89https://www.blogger.com/profile/16504896361566138574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-68528422997697888652011-06-09T07:15:12.499-04:002011-06-09T07:15:12.499-04:00LOL, I loved this one. That would be my luck; go l...LOL, I loved this one. That would be my luck; go look for a storm, while it found my home. :)<br /><a href="http://fragilemouse.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Jules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow</a>Juleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02136045025997662057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-37041577825392443462011-06-09T06:25:41.045-04:002011-06-09T06:25:41.045-04:00I got the shivers. This is a whirlwind of a story,...I got the shivers. This is a whirlwind of a story, literally, and I love it.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01425418200940737247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-68631316880900162302011-06-09T02:11:17.043-04:002011-06-09T02:11:17.043-04:00I love this. Wow. Such a vivid image.
http://theg...I love this. Wow. Such a vivid image.<br /><br />http://thegirlthreedoorsdown.blogspot.com/The Girl Three Doors Downhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06845692184766656564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-74611437103882579552011-06-08T22:06:20.997-04:002011-06-08T22:06:20.997-04:00Damn it, I never should have left. I loved that he...Damn it, I never should have left. I loved that hearth.<br /><br />Excellent stuff, li.Nate Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690171790664252309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-51212399892041012472011-06-08T21:49:45.411-04:002011-06-08T21:49:45.411-04:00Good little poem or whatever it isGood little poem or whatever it isTIMMYTHEROBOThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05281747187902823064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-33767961055823537532011-06-08T21:45:25.637-04:002011-06-08T21:45:25.637-04:00You must be a fan of song 'jar of hearts',...You must be a fan of song 'jar of hearts', goes along well with the story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-90221416824562013892011-06-08T20:06:02.175-04:002011-06-08T20:06:02.175-04:00Fabulous analogy! And I love the lesson this piece...Fabulous analogy! And I love the lesson this piece teaches.Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.com