tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post7854646739406133198..comments2024-03-20T21:37:01.626-04:00Comments on Flash Fiction: Family - #FridayFlash FictionLihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-85265935973911477062013-06-20T11:31:03.093-04:002013-06-20T11:31:03.093-04:00Yeah, very harsh and visceral, but loved the endin...Yeah, very harsh and visceral, but loved the ending. Few wounds that the loyalty of a dog can't heal.Bevimushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924337684790883853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-59555429419365920102013-06-19T18:19:57.361-04:002013-06-19T18:19:57.361-04:00The end really pulled it all together for me. Grit...The end really pulled it all together for me. Gritty, but nice too. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-37049172463751433062013-06-17T16:07:12.637-04:002013-06-17T16:07:12.637-04:00Excellent work Li. Gritty yet uplifting. Excellent work Li. Gritty yet uplifting. Mandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11931248631361366673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-11309819087349010052013-06-17T07:39:11.359-04:002013-06-17T07:39:11.359-04:00nice, i like this blog, but my have better text so...nice, i like this blog, but my have better text sorry man, check <a href="http://www.taern.com" rel="nofollow">rappelz</a> blogWszystka alkoholowa Poznań - Esperal Poznańhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02346941994538683526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-49155112966350691802013-06-16T13:29:26.628-04:002013-06-16T13:29:26.628-04:00Great job! I love the way you left them as snippet...Great job! I love the way you left them as snippets until they began to tie together at the end. Chuck Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17363611239865782087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-59917894819838535762013-06-16T03:18:21.524-04:002013-06-16T03:18:21.524-04:00Very gritty, quite intense - really good writing!Very gritty, quite intense - really good writing!Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-13041544175470430612013-06-15T23:48:24.774-04:002013-06-15T23:48:24.774-04:00I read this earlier today and it actually stayed w...I read this earlier today and it actually stayed with me--i found myself thinking about this one at work. <br /><br />You hit a homer with this one. pegjethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15255191759031800811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-18851928849941730922013-06-15T08:36:25.526-04:002013-06-15T08:36:25.526-04:00Li, your male voice is so strong and true. Love th...Li, your male voice is so strong and true. Love the moves in time/scenes. Tough and gritty all right.Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-5388904785677986162013-06-15T08:13:35.475-04:002013-06-15T08:13:35.475-04:00Gritty is right. This was well done. Gritty is right. This was well done. pegjethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15255191759031800811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-2966321023606819042013-06-15T02:02:15.094-04:002013-06-15T02:02:15.094-04:00Good shift between sections and neatly tied togeth...Good shift between sections and neatly tied together at the end.<br />Adam B @revhappinessAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-61372840234703698952013-06-14T19:43:29.166-04:002013-06-14T19:43:29.166-04:00I like the voice in this, Lisa. Good work on a tou...I like the voice in this, Lisa. Good work on a tough subject.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-82873190053988285962013-06-14T19:38:56.878-04:002013-06-14T19:38:56.878-04:00Wow, the evolution of that character is amazing! C...Wow, the evolution of that character is amazing! Changed and yet not changed. Very powerful, Lisa.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-20411644862197328442013-06-14T18:29:14.391-04:002013-06-14T18:29:14.391-04:00A dog-eat-dog world. That got pretty grim, Lisa! B...A dog-eat-dog world. That got pretty grim, Lisa! But I still smiled for parts, and definitely enjoyed it.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-68578202542690817792013-06-14T17:13:22.433-04:002013-06-14T17:13:22.433-04:00Thanks Larry. It's a third draft - the first w...Thanks Larry. It's a third draft - the first was too long and convoluted, the second was so pared down that my faithful beta reader became a little confused - hopefully this version is juuust right! :-)Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-14444750760353417642013-06-14T17:09:01.773-04:002013-06-14T17:09:01.773-04:00Thank you Marc! I've been trying my hand at di...Thank you Marc! I've been trying my hand at different genres - I need to expand my horizons a little!Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-72158611187925271302013-06-14T16:28:04.194-04:002013-06-14T16:28:04.194-04:00I was wondering if there was any connection beyond...I was wondering if there was any connection beyond the "family" theme, but the last part pulled the whole thing together. A wonderful little story of redemption.Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-82890737818423772992013-06-14T14:22:33.085-04:002013-06-14T14:22:33.085-04:00Lisa, your versatility as a writer never ceases to...Lisa, your versatility as a writer never ceases to amaze me, this was so gritty and hard! great stuff<br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.com