tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post853793179200000937..comments2024-03-20T21:37:01.626-04:00Comments on Flash Fiction: When the River Horse Swallows the Moon - Flash FictionLihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-82410977282206115052014-06-11T16:44:53.052-04:002014-06-11T16:44:53.052-04:00Hope your sleepover went well! I'm honored th...Hope your sleepover went well! I'm honored that you spent your midnight hours reading here. :-)Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-92133653283439191242014-06-09T22:26:33.334-04:002014-06-09T22:26:33.334-04:00Heyo and just stopping in for my midnight reading ...Heyo and just stopping in for my midnight reading marathon. I have a sleepover tomorrow and I'm so excited that I can't sleep, so I'm reading here. Keep the stories coming! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-29199995856239198652011-09-28T09:56:28.193-04:002011-09-28T09:56:28.193-04:00BTW, ZENCHERRY - I can't visit your blog (if y...BTW, ZENCHERRY - I can't visit your blog (if you have one) because there's no link :-)) Please leave one if you wish, or better yet, add it to your profile so others can find you too ! :-)Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-73374184518594840452011-09-27T01:59:59.428-04:002011-09-27T01:59:59.428-04:00Beautiful. I love that the other woman is a photo...Beautiful. I love that the other woman is a photographer and not who she assumed she was. A great ending to a great story. Also, thanks for the added info about the blue moons. Very cool. <br />Congrats on your publications. That is really exciting and you are so very deserving.Heather Henryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01754067768246898183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-91316961713868782282011-09-25T00:16:50.333-04:002011-09-25T00:16:50.333-04:00A nice romantic ending for her. I'm glad he re...A nice romantic ending for her. I'm glad he returned as promised.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-76352032936174139962011-09-23T14:26:53.693-04:002011-09-23T14:26:53.693-04:00Congrats on the publishes! And I enjoyed your tale...Congrats on the publishes! And I enjoyed your tale -- very cool character names.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-37616561134272165022011-09-23T10:07:36.841-04:002011-09-23T10:07:36.841-04:00Li, love the story, and the poetic, oral storytell...Li, love the story, and the poetic, oral storytelling feel to it. You express that beautifully, along with so many gorgeous details, the dogs swirling around his knees.<br /><br />Sometimes, ya gotta write the story that's begging to be written, whether it fits certain parameters or not.Beverly Diehlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00392288953821757887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-61746300150906065142011-09-23T06:59:48.764-04:002011-09-23T06:59:48.764-04:00Brian - the other girl is a photographer who's...Brian - the other girl is a photographer who's come along to photograph the lunar eclipse :-)<br /><br />John - you're right :-) I originally wrote this for RFW and was trying to keep it to a 400 word count. (Failed anyway.) So, I should probably re-write the piece and include some stuff I cut out, as well as working in the footnote material.<br /><br />Zencherry - thank you :-) <br /><br />@Damyanti - thanks! Pub. was a nice little boost during a hectic period. :-)<br /><br />Sophie - thank you, it's a lot different from what I usually write, but I like to experiment once in a while.Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-57727488953612679652011-09-23T04:31:11.396-04:002011-09-23T04:31:11.396-04:00A lovely break from the real world... I enjoyed re...A lovely break from the real world... I enjoyed reading this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-60406109087252550252011-09-23T02:16:58.501-04:002011-09-23T02:16:58.501-04:00Lovely piece, Li :)
And congratulations on all th...Lovely piece, Li :)<br /><br />And congratulations on all those publications!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-14901988090646822011-09-23T02:07:05.513-04:002011-09-23T02:07:05.513-04:00Very good description and character build up. Exce...Very good description and character build up. Excellent job.Zencherryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12519710147467996701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-47923802497670332002011-09-23T00:35:03.996-04:002011-09-23T00:35:03.996-04:00That is a madly long explanation out of a footnote...That is a madly long explanation out of a footnote! At first I thought the story was twice as long.<br /><br />For me the best part is the sense of the alien, expressed in what the disk might be, or the manner of dress, or the behaviors.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7005986735966635433.post-85892517056053389092011-09-22T22:38:38.140-04:002011-09-22T22:38:38.140-04:00nice...i like her character...still not sure how t...nice...i like her character...still not sure how this will end...iget that he is keepinghis promise but..who is the other girl?Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com