Monday, May 9, 2011

Guilty - Flash Fiction

I wished him dead. He died.
"So, am I a murderer?" I asked.
"Depends. If you have that power, wish him alive again."
I didn't.
So I guess I am.

19 comments:

  1. this says so much -all in30 words!

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  2. i'm liking the psychological points you're putting across lately

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  3. Thought provoking all in thirty words.

    Yvonne.

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  4. A few words, but I read them over and over again. And, I could continue to so. This is excellent, thought-provoking stuff.

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  5. Maybe you just used up all of your wishes?

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  6. Wow -- nicely done. This one will linger.

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  7. Wow Li, that is few heavy words there. I'll have to think on this for awhile :)
    Jules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow

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  8. Really intense boxing with a higher power thought wave here. Just super,li.

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  9. Wow, I find flash fictions hard to write in under 200 words. To do it in 30 is exceptional. Beautifully concise.

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  10. To 30 words is quite content ... Who has not been at some point in their life murder of thinking?

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  11. Wow. Short, sharp, and shocking. Loved it!

    Ellie Garratt

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  12. Excellent! You are so good at using just a few words to tell a complete story!

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  13. Haaaaaaaaaa, oh this is so deliciously wicked!!

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