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love the imagery :)
ReplyDeleteDrink seems to make many Magpier's maudlin this week... :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful and expressive,
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Twist ending!
ReplyDeleteI've tasted the wine and the blood!
ReplyDeleteawe. For some reason this made me kinda sad!
ReplyDeleteOh, very good. What would we have done if it was a glass of white in the photo?
ReplyDeleteNice - few words big story.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and succinct. Loved the imagery.
ReplyDeleteOuchhh!! This was one "dark" piece.. loved it!!
ReplyDeleteHugs x
Nice one!
ReplyDeleteLisa,
ReplyDeleteAs usual, great stuff. The word stained makes the poem.
Always glad when I drop by.
TS
I agree with Corrina, nice imagery.
ReplyDeleteNice one, short and sharp!
ReplyDeleteTake Care
Marinela
Short Poems
Interested in knowing what the dye versus the wine stain means, but liking the sound of it all.
ReplyDeleteHi everyone:
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments! normally I answer them, but the A to Z Challenge is eating into my time tremendously. If you check back here, PLEASE leave a link to your blog. Some of you don't list your blog (if you have one) on your profile, so I can't check you out or follow you back!
Reveals a depth of feeling, as relationships often go...
ReplyDeleteI was sad up until the last line :)
ReplyDeleteJules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow
very nicely written.
ReplyDeleteLisa
InspiredbyLisa
Li, very few people have the ability to make a difference with minimal word usage. You have that gift! Loved it!!
ReplyDeletedistilled excellence
ReplyDeleteThis is both heartbreaking and lovely. Love the imagery, too!
ReplyDeleteStellar!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautifully composed ...
ReplyDeleteNicely expressed!
ReplyDeleteLots of story in that brief piece - nicely crafted!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Very beautifully written.
ReplyDeletebeautiful words... really conveyed the sadness of the characters.
ReplyDeleteSuccinct. Well written!
ReplyDeleteHere's my Magpie poem.
Another short and sweet Magpie...
ReplyDeleteooh! darkly delicious :D nicely written!
ReplyDeleteMy Magpie Post
AWESOME!!!!
ReplyDeleteJOhn
cute.
ReplyDeletedelicate piece.
ReplyDeletebeautiful write…
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Heyo... just going to quote this in my blog...
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